The novelist Paul West has had the greatest influence on my development as a writer. I first had the great fortune of encountering this member of the American Academy of Arts and Letters, winner of the Prix Médicis and the Lannan Literary Award for Fiction, Literary Lion of the New York Public Library system, and so on in an advanced undergraduate fiction writing course, one of the last undergraduate courses he taught, at Penn State in 1985. I later had the pleasure and honor of working with him at the graduate level, also at Penn State. The memory Paul telling an undergraduate me, as if astonished, “You can write!” still has the power to revive my spirit and resolve, even in an age when, as Paul might say, the latest thriller is dissected on NPR as high art, or, worse, when we should be happy if the number of educated readers in the world is fifteen thousand because soon it will be ten.
While Paul’s teaching methods veered away from the lecture and toward the conversation, perhaps sensing there’s more to be learned in thoughtful digressions than in a prepared agenda, he occasionally offered direct advice on matters of craft. In 1985, he handed out a a two-page numbered list with the simple heading “Fiction” that presented what I would call “tips and tricks” for aspiring writers. Several years later, he handed out this same document to members of his graduate fiction writing seminar (you can read about us in his memoir, Master Class), the list having grown to 51 items.
Here I present the the sixth installment of Paul’s tips. Look for more of these tips in future posts. If you haven’t, I encourage you to look at the previous installments:
Paul West’s Fiction List, Part VI
25. Don’t hesitate to make the reader wonder: the more you can make him your accomplice, the more you can attempt.
26. See that your work has topography (as if you were to shove a brick, or a body, underneath a sheet); incorporate items that will bulge, protrude.
27. When resorting to typographical gimmickry, make sure the reader won’t skid over the device: provide enough thought-provocation to detain and occupy him while the device works on him.
28. Go over your work and look for places where energy has waned, where the writing has fallen below your conception. Equally, be sure you can recognize when you’ve ended a story with a temporary ending–a cork in the bottle. The temporary ending will give you a sense of completeness, but go back and provide the ending the story has earned.
29. Stay alert for occassions when the narrator is more interesting than his material: in other words, recognize when you’re supervising a study in commenting consciousness.
2 thoughts on “Craft Notes: Paul West’s Technical Advice for Fiction Writers, Part VI”
Hi Ed. Enjoyed your “Microcosms” essay from the Purple Mind panel. Often wondered how he’s doing, along with you others from the Allen Building fifth floor table.
Good to hear from you. You would have enjoyed the panel, in particular Dave Kress’s piece in which he recounted discovering plans for a model glider PW had published as a teenager in a model airplane magazine. Dave obtained the plans, of course, from an internet site, then proceeded to build the thing (though he had no experience with models). He then sent the model to PW, who as you likely know suffered a terrible stroke several years ago from which he’s still recovering. To top it off, Dave, on his way to the Buffalo conference, stopped in Ithica to visit PW, who recounted his pleasure at taking the model out for a glide in the yard despite Diane’s protest that it was too cold!
Hope you are well!